Consists of a printout of "Camouflage", the author's name is "Beverley E Brown". This is annotated in red and blue ink, presumably by Beverliey Braune. This is held in a Sheffield Thursday Preview photocopy.

Consists of one full printout and one letter. The printout is annotated in red and black ink focusing on layout and pagination decisions. The letter is from Maura Dooley to Neil Astley referring to her corrections and also an extra dedication.

Printout with annotations by Neil Astley mainly regarding layout and photograph space.

Consists of an annotated page proof. The person who has annotated this refers to "John" and uses post-it notes to add notes or indicate where corrections have been made.

Consists of a page proof, two pages are printed on different days. These are annotated in red ink with print error corrections and added information (translated titles).

Consists of a proof annotated by Neil Astley highlighting print error. This item was found with item BXB/1/1/GRG/2/2.

Consists of a proof annotated in red ink and pencil by Neil Astley and Deborah Randall regarding setting and corrections.

Consists of a page proof with annotations in pencil correcting the pagination, typography and layout corrections (in file labelled MSS & Proofs).

Consists of a proof that is annotated in red ink by Neil Astley, correcting print error and also asking for more information from Merryn Williams. Merryn Williams has added information in black ink.

Consists of a proof with annotations mainly regarding the layout in red ink. There are several versions of the dedication and acknowledgements, these are photocopies and also include sections that have been printed out and stapled in.